What do I think?
I can write about that ‘cos I know, I thought it. It was in my head, My brain and I can remember thinking it.
But is it honest to include such opinions and sometimes firm statements describing someone else’s thoughts? Can anyone ever know?
I was reading a short story in which the main character was in a shop buying a dress. There had been a few, brief, conversational exchanges in the shop, but she went on to explain how, after leaving, she had concluded that the proprietress was having an ongoing argument with herself about what to do about the slowly diminishing sales of the goods she dealt in, whether to sell up and move on, change the product for cheaper stuff or just carry on and hope.
How did she know that? The narrator I mean. How did she know what the lady thought? Unless she told her, the proprietress (if that’s a word) (which it is ‘cos I’ve just looked it up) had told the narrator I mean, and that hadn’t been mentioned thus far into the story.
Can I write what’s in your head?